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Last sale of the year to help fund the game! https://itch.io/s/175894/winter-sale-2025-fund-doce-fim

All purchases go directly to paying the artists and voice actors. With the $100 goal we can fund one solo CG + 10 voiced lines of dialogue, or 30 voiced lines!

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hello i just started playing and i'm really looking forward to kie's route. i read that the demo doesn't have him and i'm wondering if it is out and i need to download the full game first or it's still being worked on?

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Hi! Kie’s route is the True Route, a.k.a the final route that closes out the game and gives everyone closure, unlocked after finishing all routes in full. Since the full game is still in development and needs funding support, it would be impossible to have it in the demo, as it would include major spoilers to the rest of the game and wouldn’t make much sense to y’all. It would be like someone starting a book from the last chapter.

I’m working on an extended free update to the demo that will add tons of new scenes with Kie and give lots of hints on what his route will be like =)

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ohh i see thank you so much i really love ur work so far, you capture the anxiety thoughts really well as its something i deal with too :). take care on the rest of the project and dont overwhelm yourself ! ill be on the lookout for that thank you so much, your creativity is beyond amazing !!

great

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wonderful game!

does anyone know if there's any "not interested" option on itch.io? it's cool that there's a game about someone who thought they were a gay man realizing they're a trans lesbian, that's cool or whatever, i also have 0 interest in it. tried rating the game 1 star, left a negative review that got deleted, everything, but it keeps showing up on my recommended.

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Hrm... I call rage bate :3 like i have games im not interested in but i dont go and downvote every comment, review bomb its success or anything like that. You know what i do? I just scroll past like a normal person would. :)

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Just finished the demo yesterday, holy crap i need more Lion in my lifeee


Oh also love the game, it was a good read! Golden star stickers to everyone involved in this game! :D

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Thank you so much for playing!! <3

There will be plenty more Lion (his route is…. crazy long….), hope you stick around for the extended demo update coming next year! Yipieeeeee

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I didn't even read Lion's full bio for some silly reason, and the further on I got I was like, this boi is autistic, just like me! Then I read the full bio was like, ohhhhh, anyways, I love him, he is bean, and Syun is also a bean, and I relate to them both- (Just finished the demo, please don't hurt Lion lol! He is such a bean! And one of the first not just autistic code but actually autistic character I can fully relate too! (Just joking of course, do what ever you want with your game!)

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I’m happy to hear you could relate to Lion! Thank you for playing 💞💞

I’m sure he’ll be fine… he’s just a lil guy :’)

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Super interesting premise~ I can't play it rn, but I'm looking forward to it when I do! Please keep up the good work <3 Syun. Is very cute. And too relatable 😭 the way I dress simply cannot be described as "fashionable" at all lol

Ooh hope you enjoy! Syun is best boy indeed!

Haha same, if I could I would wear the same clothes every day of the week like he does… </3

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AWAY, SPAM COMMENTS >:(

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I know my og comment was over a day ago but my dumbass forgot to include this bit in that and I only remembered like, 30 minutes ago lol

Anyways I think one of the things I like the most in visual novels in general is the fact that time does not pass while I make aa decision because I am using  that time to overthink it to hell. In this game, the duality ones even more than just any regular choice moment. A good example is that on moment in Lion's route where you have to choose wether or not Syun tells him he's acting cute and I had a 20 minute panic before answering. 5 minutes of trying to figure it out myself, 10 minutes of explaining the situation to a guy friend of mine and 5 minutes of us trying to reach a consensus on what to do. I ended up not saying anything then replaying that part and saying it after finishing the route. Turns out the best option was voicing those thoughts lol. Honestly time pausing whenever I have conflicting opinions so I can figure them out is an ability I wish I had, even if I think it would make me live 10 times longer, that is if I don't spend the equivalent to an entire week caught on a single moment every month (would probably happen)

Btw sorry I ended up rambling I usually try to control myself andit doesn't always really end well and I end up yapping too much, my apologies

Finally, bom trabalho com o jogo, adorei!

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I just finished playing Lion's route and I got to say, I absolutely loved the demo! The whole time I felt like Syun was so relatable in his paranoia and his fears for writing. I even found myself crying because I legit wanted to give him a hug and reassure him. And that cliffhanger?! I cant wait to see where this goes! Definitely playing the full game when it comes out!

Thank you so much for playing! I know right? I feel bad for what I’m putting our poor boy through 😭 I’m glad to hear that I was able to convey his struggles properly

And a cliffhanger??? No way, everything is fine here, everyone is okay! Haha… ha… :’(

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I just finished playing through all routes and THAT CLIFFHANGER?? HELP

I reeeeeaaally wish I could support this in any way but I don't have the financial freedom to do that as someone who is not yet of age and my parents would never let me TT

Anyways, as someone who is kinda naturally paranoid as well (I say kinda because idk if you need a diagnosis for this and I am genuinely afraid of being sure of anything because holy crap what if I don't have it and I end up just being one of those people that give a bad name to a community because they're faking it and I am so sorry for this unrelated rant I just always feel the need to make that clear lol) the bubbles were a deeply relatable experience for me and I did spiral over them juuust a bit, they really just fueled my brain (I don't mean this in a bad way btw, I was aware the game wasn't really real so it was kinda like fake anxiety? idk how to put it but it wasn't serious). All that just to say it felt like a great way to represesnt that ad I am so so sorry for rambling so much

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Thank you so much for playing!

I’m a paranoid person too (used to be as bad as Syun) and making the paranoia system was like… therapeutic for me? So knowing that someone else understands and relates to the way I presented it makes me feel a bit less alone. It’s tough, but I believe we’ll be okay =)

You can support the game without needing any money by giving a 5 star rating here on Itch.io and adding it to your Steam wishlist =) https://store.steampowered.com/app/3808270/ It helps boost the algorithm! And share it your friends and on social media too, so others know it exists!

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I get that the paranoid system was also almost therapeutic in a way for me. Seeing someone else, even if just a fictional character, struggles with the same thoughts. Thankfully for me it's been getting better recently as well so I think we'll be okay too :)

I'll definitely do all that then, I'm glad I can help in any way

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ahhh i just played through lion's route in full! it was super cute... but what was that ending 😭💔

i might be getting to the other routes sometime as well :3 i'll be supporting the full version too !!

Thank you for playing!! Glad to hear you enjoyed ^-^

The ending? It’s normal… everyone is okay… nothing bad is happening…

😭

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it takes quite a long time for it to load Maybe it's my wifi or smt but a great game!!! 

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Downloadable version has no loading times =) Thanks for playing!

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Duda cuando dice de una traductora de español literalmente es traducir todo pero como nada más te traduce el juego y tú lo editas en el juego o hace todo?

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y en español para cuando ????

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Necesito dinero para contratar a una traductora de español.

Edit: Also it kinda feels bad to spend months and almost get burnt out translating the game for free and the first comment about it to be a demand for another translation :’(

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Agora que eu lembrei que você é brasileira, POR FAVOR TRADUZ O JOGO! Nunca te pedi nada! Eu sou carente de jogo bom em português! Por favor! Por favor! Por favooooor!!!

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Nossa esse post foi parar no spam…

Eu não tenho dinheiro nem tempo, infelizmente. Vou precisar de orçamento para poder contratar alguém para traduzir

EDIT: Desmaiei, vi Deus, e saiu a traduçâo.

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I absolutely loved your other game, MYGF, and I'm very interested in playing this one. However, I can't read English and I don't know if there will be a translation, but I know that, like your other games, this one must be amazing! I hope that someday you can translate it into Brazilian Portuguese. I'm definitely your biggest fan now! (I'm translating using Google Translate, so please forgive any strange language.)

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(SPOILER WARNING?) This game was so beautifully made I love how each character is portrayed and their character designs are so cute!! I love all of the characters I can't wait for the full game to come out!!  Also the ending of this demo was  cruel ajdhfjdikjvifdk T_T saddest cliffhanger ever

Thank you for playing!!

Cliffhanger…. what cliffhanger… everything is normal here 💔😭

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Would appreciate 5 star ratings if y’all enjoyed the game 💞 seriously helps with itchio’s algorithm. I’m trying very hard to make this game reach more people who need it with the few resources I have, so that’s something YOU can do to boost it!

I’ve been working on scripting Rikka’s route in the full game these past 3 days. My poor blorbina is gonna have it rough </3

Great game! I was wondering if you ever plan to translate it into other languages. I'm Brazilian and I really enjoyed the game, but I need to use a translator to play it. It's a great game though!
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Obrigada! Traduções custam milhares de dólares e eu não tenho esse orçamento, infelizmente. O jogo é gigante…

caramba milhares de dolares são quase uns 4 trilões de reais 

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I love this demo i love the plot and everything obviously like i love how well written is Syun and other characters, firstly im glad i founded this and the paranoia bubbles and the duality mode is so good (everything is AMAZING IN THIS).  Secondly partly i can associate with Syun soooo... it really was emotional for me. I CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!

Thank you so much for playing! I’m working on an update and hope to release it soon~ <3

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O kent é o Eminem??

….socorro 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 não é o headcanon que eu esperava ver hoje

KAKAKAKSJDAKAKKAKAKKA

This is beautiful, you are inspiring me to do better like you are. Thank you!

❤️❤️🫶

I LOVE LION SM 

sob, i didnt read the warning i was jumpscared by the mc's nightmare T-T

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Lion best boy!! ❤️❤️❤️

Make sure to read the warnings, this game gets very dark and heavy…

WHYYYY LION WHY.

A very good game! Not gonna lie about it, I wasn't expected to find myself wanting to know more about the news like I am right now, I'm gonna be honest, I think its has great potential and probably be a know and good recieved game.

I play a lot of visual novels and this one is the one I'm hyperfixed right now too, the protagonist its interesting and have a complex personality, Lion and the most characters are pretty cool!

THE FINAL WAS BRUTAL, just like a danganronpa reference, esence.

Thank you so much for playing, glad you enjoyed! ❤️

excellent game

Thank you so much!

I LOVE THIS GAME i downloaded it on my laptop

Thank you for playing!!!

syun is so well written it hurts. the way this portrays anxiety feels so real

I’m glad to hear I was able to convey it properly ❤️

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a discord server for doce fim is something a lot of people who filled the feedback form are asking for, but i dont have time or energy (i’m syun irl) to moderate one… 💔 and it’s tough to manage a community!

if a fanmade one were created, i would happily join to chat about the game.

(a community manager is something i would like to hire if a publisher deal or a grant happens… pspsps…..)

So far I've only played Lion's route, but OH MY GOD this game is AMAZING so far!!! It's easily already one of my favorite visual novels. The characters, aside from having gorgeous designs, are all so interesting, I can't wait to learn all about them in the full game! Syun is an amazing protagonist, the paranoia system is one of my favorite parts of the game, it's unlike anything I've ever seen before and it portrays anxiety in such a real way. I feel like Syun overall is just such a real character, and he really resonates with me. I can't wait to see more from these characters and mechanics, the game is just so beautiful </3 the cliff hanger was absolutely evil though.. i love it and i can't wait to see what happens next!!

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Thank you so much for playing!! I’m really happy to hear that! <3

Cliffhanger… what cliffhanger… everything is fine here! Everything is normal!

There is nothing wrong :)

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I have a question that might be a little... silly? (╥﹏╥)

Is the demo translated into Spanish ∘ ∘ ∘ ( °ヮ° ) ?

Sadly no, it would be an investment of thousands of dollars to get it translated to any language… </3

Thank you so much anyway (╥ ω ╥), your work is beautifulꉂ (≧ヮ≦), I'll learn English because of this. (ᵕ—ᴗ—)

Soo a bit of an odd question, can you please tell me the file of the custom cursor i liked it a bit too much that i wanna make it my custom one

Unfortunately I couldn’t afford the rights to share the individual files when I commissioned the cursor! </3

Oh well its all good thank you for answering

meu deus...que jogo bommm os personagens são tão fofinhos adorei como cada um é diferentes uns dos outros amei as personalidades deles especialmente de kie e komi :3 , as crises de syun são muito bem escritas...eu realmente fiquei com pena dele, são poucos jogos que eu vi abordarem esses temas de maneira mais realista ficou muito bom...achei a historia otima e bastante criativa, personagens fofos e desenhos de gatinhos >:3

Muito obrigada por jogar!!! Os gatinhos são a melhor parte 🐈🐈

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Holy cow, that cliff hanger hit me like a truck! Like I came out of a heartfelt moment and then bam boom! Now I just have to play the full game after that! (Personally, I am really excited to see Lion's and Kie's routes, they're both just way too cute :D)

Thank you so much for playing!! I’ll work hard to bring the full game to life!

image.png There is no horrifying cliffhanger in Doce Fim.

If you have a few minutes, there’s a survey! I’d love to hear your thoughts on the game :D (it also helps me with pitching the game to publishers and investors, to show that there folks who are interested in seeing the full game come to life~) https://forms.gle/Y92MQpta3Qo6yNYt7

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Android version is down for a little bit while I investigate some bugs 🫶 It should be back later today!

EDIT: Fixed the more obvious bugs, so it’s back o7

It's a great game but I do have a problem when playing it 😅 I downloaded the game on Android but it keeps having errors? Like a file not being found and the sudden reparation of the dialogue I do hope those can be fixed but really it's such a great game

Ah!! I’m very sorry about that, I’ll review the Android build today! Since it was a last minute decision to have it on phones I think something might’ve escaped me ;;

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Somehow we’re on the front page of itchio?? If you’re reading this and are new, I would love to hear your thoughts on the demo!

Even if you’ve never played a visual novel before, there is a lot of cool content in this game. Doce Fim is a love letter to my favorite VNS. I love visual novels and indie games with my all heart, so I hope you’ll fall in love with Doce Fim too 🌈❤️

What a lovely cast of characters and hefty demo! I haven't even finished all of the routes available in the demo and already I've spent a lot of time playing it. The creator really packed a lot of content into the demo and you can really get a feel for all of the characters! I'm wanting to root for Syun and see where this club leads him; Looking forward to the rest of the story in the full release!!!

Thank you for playing!! I hope you enjoy the rest of the game ☆*: .。. o(≧▽≦)o .。.:*☆ It’s a long boi isn’t it… I had to cut a lot of content and make some tough choices on what content to keep, so I’m glad that it worked and you can get a good feel for everyone!!

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