me mostre sonhos doces
A downloadable game for Windows, macOS, and Linux
Content warning: eyestrain, implied violence, death, substance use, implied suicide
Contains sensitive content that may be triggering to certain audiences.
Main story length: ~12k words
"Surely, if I keep taking these, one day I'll stop having nightmares."
A short queer story about searching for sweet winter dreams. A sequel to Overcomp, and submission to the 2023 Winter Visual Novel Jam.
I chose to interpret the jam's theme as 'Loneliness', 'Emptiness', and 'Desolation'. It's not a traditional wintertime tale, but rather one that conveys the feelings the season reminds me of.
Featuring cute pixel art, existencial dread, and a talking cactus.
Also featuring some silly minigames and guest art from friends!
HINTS:
- For the first dreams, you are limited to one pill at a time. More will open up as you progress.
- Some dreams must be played multiple times. If they don't show up in your Dream Diary, then it means there are more choices left to make.
- There is one ending, achievable from viewing every dream and taking all 10 pills. To do so, you need to have all 9 previous dreams in your diary, so try out the various choices!
- There is post-game content and some very well-hidden secrets to uncover. I challenge you to make sense of them ;)
Languages: English, Brazilian Portuguese, French
French translation by: Cerise Daner
If you enjoyed the game, consider leaving a donation and checking out my other projects.
The 'Donation Wallpapers' download is a way for you to support me and get some goodies. Those are wallpapers I made for an unused in-game computer, available in HD, QHD, and 4K sizes for use in your desktop... and some other extras.
I greatly appreciate reviews and comments! If you'd like, there's a feedback form you can fill out after you finish the game.
Play the PREQUEL:
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Related projects featuring the same protagonist:
(The title means 'show me sweet dreams' in Portuguese.)
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Development log
- French translation now available!Aug 10, 2024
- Overcomp + MSSD Prequel available on PatreonJul 03, 2024
- Hotfix: 100% completion now recognizedDec 27, 2023
- Nonsense mode now available!Dec 26, 2023
- Hotfix - Typo fixesDec 25, 2023
- me mostre sonhos doces - now released!Dec 22, 2023
- [SPOILERS] Post-Jam thoughts, and ideas for updatesDec 22, 2023
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great game! i got dream 11 >:]
it was very enjoyable, scary at times funny at others, great visuals and music, and very creative format for a renpy game
also all the shade you threw at vn devs was funny
people (myself included) discover how persistent variables work and the first thing they can think of is a time loop story
(i feel called out)
anyway 10/10 would recommend
Thank you for playing!! That was no shade to other devs, 100% to myself as I’ve made a grand total of 5 time loop stories and I can’t seem to go past that as I’m literally writing another one right now lol
I’m very glad you enjoyed it! ❤️
i guess shade wasn't the right word.. but still very amusing >:]
I Really like this game though I got sad when i coudnt see the diary log of grim reaper since I went ahead and took 7 pills SOB
Oh no! ;_; I didn’t think of that. Maybe I could add something that lets you re-read past diary logs…
QUE JOGO PERFEITO!! maravilhoso. Provavelmente é o primeiro ou segundo jogo de visual novel que é brasileiro, estou comovido! é tudo tao bonito e fofo.
Muito obrigada!! ❤️ Estou preparando mais VNs 100% brasileiras agora mesmo! 🇧🇷
Que bom saber! nunca desista <3
i don't have money to buy it
but i see brazilian portuguese there
(it's epic)
it’s free
i'm stupid lmao
I liked the game, really like the concept, the ui and is well written (really liked the 1st, 2nd and 7th dreams, with my favorite being the 4th.). I unlocked the 11th dream, so a winner is me.
A winner is you!! Thank you for playing!
Loved the game.
Thank you for playing and- 😭😭😭😭 why have you done this.
ALRIGHT! SO!!! Fantastic game, loads of fun and tons of replay ability specifically for the minigames. I did the greatly advised against act of taking that "Aim for 99!!" with 100% seriousness and refused to listen to reason. Anyway, you scared the crap outta me by programming in a close game function after doing 100, bcuz I hadnt saved since I had done my highscore of 30 for the memory game. Anyway, here's my photographic proof.
Victory truly is sweet.
And before you become worried...I did space out my memory puzzle gimic. I did it twenty or so at a time, taking intermittent breaks to do other stuff in the game, like the puzzles or dreams. But I am insane, and to be revered and feared <3
Anyway, I didn't realise the time loop dream had anything but the song in it because I got the song my FIRST TIME FOR THAT DREAM. I DIDNT KNOW THAT WAS LIMITED EDITION !!! I DIDNT APPRECIATE THE SINGING ENOUGH </333 Srsly, you sung like an angel, in my totally unbiased happy opinion.
I only realised there was more to that dream because of your DEV log notes saying that if I didn't recognise the tune, I hadn't found all there was to that dream. . . I did recognise the tune, but i replayed the dream for the other content in there. MMMM FUN STUFF !!!
Btw, found a glitch
When you say "do another puzzle" without taking a break, uh. This happens. (screenshot taken halfway through me already doing the puzzle bcuz i felt like it)
The previous puzzle that I solved got stuck on the screen and was there until I completed the new puzzle, which then replaced that image. So yeah! Glitch found.
Here is my Thing! Their name is Beebee
I love and appreciate my special "Thanks for playing" artwork very gently thank you for that <3 Yes. Very nice.
I still have the bonding with Komi to do, but I am currently stuck as girlie requires me to tell her what her favourite sport is............I do not know her fav sport and I am unsure of where to go to unlock that information so that would be real handy ngl,,,,,,,,
Being able to go in and choose music to vibe to is an absolute gem of a function, cheers to that. Currently vibing to the "final boss" track.
Regardless, thank you so much for creating <3 !! All your games are so unique, it's really a blast playing around with them.
WAAAAAA THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR PLAYING!! This is such a sweet comment my heart is so full ;w; I’m so happy you enjoyed this lil project
maybe the cheeky play 99 times thing was a mistake i’m honestly scared of you warriors at this point. i didnt even bother to do it myself i just cheated the value to test it. 😭😭😭
I love Beebee, take good care of them <3
Komi’s favorite sport is ⚾️. In future post-jams updates I might change that question to an easier one. Be prepared to go digging outside the game to bond with her completely though ;)
As for the puzzle bug… 😭😭😭 I’ve never seen that happen before, and I’ve played so many times… what device are you playing on?
(ALSO I saw your answer to the form, did you ever report the Raguna issue?? If you’d like, you can upload your savefile and share it with me, and I can try to fix it for you. Maybe leave a comment on the Raguna page?)
We are very determined when it comes to being told that we can go above and beyond in minigames! Do fear us and our determination <3
Beebee is being very well-taken care of! They're precious, and I love them very much.
Thank you! Now I just need to go around and find her birthday,,, sighs,,, these questions are destroying me but for the 100%!
A victus windows laptop! So yeah, I don't know how it's happening either lmao. But it happened every time I didn't take a break between puzzles, the prior puzzle would get stuck.
And no, I never reported the Raguna bug. . .The laptop I played it on is no longer in my possession either, so I don't think I can retrieve the save file. . .Unless the save file is linked to account and not device? Idk, haven't tried games I've got save files on yet. But I assume not. Appreciate the offering to help though <33
EDIT; yeah, just doublechecked and confirmed it being my account does not save my save files for games. RIP o7
Oh RIP to your savefile…. Fs in the chat…. ;____;
Man I don’t know why that bug is happening for you, I can’t get it to happen for me.
Anyway, thanks for the support ;w; this game has been a huge flop so far compared to my past releases so any feedback I get at all means a lot.
Alerta de spoiler, talvez??
Recentemente joguei esse jogo com alguns amigos e depois baixei para jogar novamente, e com certeza é um jogo muito bom!!
Após ter jogado o My GF, esse jogo aqui se mostra bem mais autoral. Consegui te ver pegando suas referências em Visual Novel e dando seu próprio toque, gerando seu próprio estilo, algo que vimos meio de relance em My GF (mas é uma VN muito boa , ainda sim).
A progressão do jogo, a idéia de prosseguir usando os comprimidos para selecionar o capitulo, como o primeiro sonho te faz achar que vai ser uma vn "normal", os quebra cabeças e menus, tudo muito bem feito!! O time loop, o "pós-game", tudo muito bom!!
Aqui na minha cidade temos um Clube de Cultura Pop, e nós estudamos Renpy por conta para fazer jogos próprios e depois apresentar em um festival que nós promovemos. Nós fizemos várias VN's, e depois de penar para aprender muita coisa, eu consigo ficar ainda mais impressionado com o seu jogo e principalmente com a evolução que teve. Muita coisa deve ter dado muito trabalho, mas ficou muito bem executado!! A ultima cena é uma sacada muito boa.
Em relação a história, me lembrou muito do jogo The Begginer's Guide, seguindo o conceito de vários jogos/seções separadas que contam uma única história. Sua escrita está ainda melhor (embora ainda possa melhorar), e os conceitos que você aborda são pesados e relevantes, e você faz a abordagem muito bem, na medida certa de exposição e simbolismo. Fica uma impressão de ser algo mais puxado para a autobiografia, mas independente de esse ser o caso ou não, todas as mensagens e temas foram muito bem expressadas, achei fantástico a franqueza e as diferentes abordagens, além é claro de a estética sempre mudando e as diferentes temáticas escolhidas para passar a mensagem de cada sonho.
Muitos temas filosóficos e de natureza existencial, e eu acredito que cada sonho consegue produzir uma discussão muito boa e uma análise bem legal. O jeito que você conta a história e a subversão de tema e expectativa funciona muito bem, eu sempre ficava ansioso para descobrir como seria o próximo sonho, e confesso que até mesmo fiquei tenso enquanto jogava alguns. Principalmente o ultimo e, por algum motivo, a Komi me encarando (fiquei esperando um jumpscare nesse)
Muitos temas são de carater introspectivo e é dificil não ter empatia com algumas cenas, e acho que isso é verdade para todos que jogaram. Imagino que muita coisa ali pode ter sido até dificil de escrever sobre, mas foi muito bem executado.
Também quero elogiar a arte e a musica, todas as artes são muito bonitas e os sprites tem um estilo bem legal. As transições de musica também foram muito bem escolhidas e elas casam bem com as cenas.
No geral, 10/10. Trabalho sensacional e que com certeza me deixa esperando por mais produções suas no futuro!!
Oh, hey, I got to Dream #11! 87% completion (stuck on the universe question) and did 20 memory matching games.
What a varied mix of stuff. Pretty impressive for a jam entry. Little close to home with the Mirror, Lover, and the end of Cacty dreams :sus:. I also filled out the feedback form and sent you an e-mail with a list of typos I saw (hopefully it's not in Junk). Looking forward to future games!
Whoa, thank you for playing! ;w; I saw your email, gonna fix these typos and upload a fixed build as soon as I can - I’ve been staring at the script for so long it’s all mushed together for me
WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU DID THE MEMORY GAME 20 TIMES 😭😭😭😭 ARE YOU OKAY
The friends universe question is a… COLLABorative… easter egg. This last set of secrets asks the player to take it beyond the game itself to find the key ;)
EDIT: Typos fixed! Thank you!
Okay, realized what that was hinting at but then got stuck at the mirror. Tried a bunch of names, some with different responses, but ultimately had to cheat to get past it and obtain 100% (don't hate me! :( )
😔 I’m taking away your honorary Meiri Cinematic Universe diploma…………… [redacted] was right….
(to anyone else reading this, it’s very possible to find the answer to all questions legitemately, two people have done that so far. 100%ing the game is a challenge!)